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>> No.20082107 [SPOILER]  [View]
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Naked figures dance
When I close my eyes
Lithe, voluptuous, taught
Meek, cheeky, and poised

It loves unending
Sheathless blade,
Weathered, chipped
My own rusty sword

Though with only one I spar
Doomed to die and be reborn
Haughty & strong
Full-figured & begging

Blood burns my body &
I stick her like an animal
Not as would a skilled fencer
But a shiftless bandit, hungry
Fighting for survival
I love to make her
Scream & moan

>>20078548
Really pretty imagery and ideas. I'm kind of a beginner with poetry so I don't feel like I can give a lot of advice on prose, but I really like your word choice.

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