/lit/ - Literature

Searched the archive, we didn't have one, Critique Thread up in here.

Be so courteous as to critique others. No matter how pleb you are, your take on a fellow writer's work matters.
Post writing of decent, but not overwhelming length.
Make an effort to edit it so as to be readable BEFORE you post it here. These threads don't exist so that you can throw something blatantly unreadable at us.
Have your bitter fun!