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Thank you for your encouraging words. I really appreciated your review.

>Picrel
I wrote again. This time focusing on having Walter think. Feel. React. Like a normal human being. I remember one of my critics asked to see how he went from A to B. Needed to show his personality.

How can I make this better?

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