/lit/ - Literature

>>11163227
I'll only post the world building intro because the rest is even worse. I think it's the first time I ever tried to write an actual narrative and apparently I never even tried editing it.
>In the year 2501 Earth was rife with contempt. Some thought we were on the brink of a 4th world war. Scientists turned their eyes from the skies to weapon designs. Then it happened. A highly radioactive asteroid in the in the asteroid belt officially lost it’s asteroid status and struck Earth. Blowing Africa off the map and made seventy-five percent of the Earth uninhabitable. All of the surviving governments slowly formed together to form the C.F.H.A (catastrophically formed human alliance). They pooled all of their resources together to find other planets to colonize. And then we found them. For years the Sydros and the Augonauts were fighting and struggling to get an advantage. Even though we came out of the Blue they were Quick to swivel their turrets at our ships. The C.F.H.A. Quickly formed together a united military divided into four parts the common army, drivers, pilots, and the scouts. The common army was the rank and file form that anybody could get in. The pilots were harder to get in to you had to take a series of tests they were trained to control one type of vehicle. The pilots were chosen at the age of eighteen they were extensively trained in controlling all vehicles including enemies. Also they were taught how to hijack and how to get out of damaged vehicles and possessed some open training. Some pilots would become pilots of massive Assault ships or join a team that controlled the legendary mother ships. Finally the most prestigious division is the Scouts at birth the C.F.H.A. watches the kids measuring the smartest most athletic part of the population. They were then taken at the small age of five. From there they were mind wiped of their past life and were put through extensive training to get them strong. At the age of fifteen they were unstoppable machines. There they began to learn how to fight, shoot a gun, control almost all enemy and friendly vehicles, and tactics (they would at times lead groups of common soldiers). During training One soldier stood out from the others his name was Trent Jones during this time he became strong friends with another star soldier his name was Joseph Bumere his nickname was Joe boom due to him choosing explosives over all other strategies. Everything thing seemed good until the Augonauts made a sudden move to destroy the biggest C.F.H.A. war factory ever on the watery planet Bines.