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Glad to see it's just little nitpicky stuff, as opposed to huge problems with the bulk of the content.
I'm purposefully trying to use ludicrous metaphors/similes in the larger work.
For instance, elsewhere: "His willpower had not only failed, but was dancing a happy jig through a public fountain as respectable citizens strolled by with disapproving glares."

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