/lit/ - Literature

Anonymous Sun Jul 2 18:41:39 2023 No.22215483 [View]
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I've just completed a very rough first draft of my story's prologue, it's around 4.8k words long. It's the very first piece I've wrote apart from articles, essays etc. I'd appreciate any feedback, especially when it comes to prose, dialogue, charactery dynamics and plot.

(I posted this last thread too, but it was near the end, this is the last time I do it, I swear)

>Genre
Low fantasy/drama

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1L6ALt7w6wSM1OoNbvzLK-RTsb_RDUhdQqIn_GPTVs7U/edit?usp=sharing

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