/lit/ - Literature

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Waterbranch

“that cracking sea
that brittle sea”

There flows an oceanriver
barreling and crashing–
to crash against the crystal shore
that lays the pale reflection of nothing
like boughs in a storm
huge loud things
the sea is
huge, huge
and endlessly loud.

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