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TWI 10.11 H
I'm gonna go ahead and consider this the proper start of the volume, pretty fun and I'm honestly quite excited about what's gonna be happening in Chandrar for once

I'm just so tired of the Erin getting people killed to mopey chapters arcs, we've tread this path way too many times already

First chapters at the inn with everyone else and the box were pretty good too but feels like forever ago with the recent double Erin chapters which I honestly can't get myself to care much about (as much as I like some of the characters involved) until they get to civilization proper and do consequential shit, at this point of the story "low" stakes survival narratives don't matter a single bit

Quite unfortutate that the Pisces and Jecaina ship is gonna go nowhere as usual, I found their interactions quite cute

Also, shoutouts to my wife for being a slut

>>21825923
>You just have to enjoy it chapter by chapter and not be concerned with anything that happened before.
Anon, I just told you that what TWI is. You cannot enjoy it as a whole because it is not consistent in world-builidng and characters enough for that. You MUST enjoy chapters as they come, but that is not a good thing, it's a BAD thing. A big, real flaw of the story. And it could be ameliorated if the author wasn't so fucking arrogant and thought he can keep all the story in their head. He actively refuses to make notes on characters or the world, and reacts with hostility when people point that out.

Again, there are far worse flaws for a story to have, but it cannot be denied it is one.

>>21705232
>Where did you hear it?
The author took an entire week to finish up the rewrite with the help of a professional industry editor. We'll be getting the information about release any day now. Fingers crossed for a physical release.