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Anonymous Mon May 13 21:08:59 2019 No.13111172 [View]
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alright, crit my shit up. be honest but pls no bully, literally my first time

setting: opening chapter of a fictional story about the development of civilization. so far it's only shown one unnamed man chasing a deer through an open plain. this sample is as he lays in the grss too tired to chase the deer anymore

also it's supposed to be slightly humourous, but i'm not married to the concept so have at that if you must

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