/lit/ - Literature

>>5803041
>>5803088
Oh, and keep writing. The part I said was good was actually good. I'm not just saying that.

Last note, keep the narrator out of the main character's head. The fun of third person is we don't know everything that is going on in other people's heads. If you wanted to describe everything from the main character's perspective so much, just do first person.

>>5631836
>>5631464
>>5631305

Seriously though, is there any evidence that writing in a book will make you remember more thoroughly?

Ive heard similar things about reading a book that is on paper book rather than an ebook.

>>5615907
>>5615908
>>5615935
>>5615937
>>5615954
No

>>5615939
>>5615944
>>5615951
Yes.

Also, The Tatami Galaxy, Mushishi, and others.

[spoilers] Seriously didnt we just have this thread? [/spoiler]

>>5506504
The entire story is told from the main character's perspective, and Akashi, the girl in pic, serves like Lolita in Lolita. The main character will say this and that about her but you dont really know if what he is saying is the truth. Its not nearly as dark though as Lolita, dont get the wrong idea. She usually is a voice of reason in the series, however she isnt uppity. Shes just cold and assertive.