/lit/ - Literature

>>16019389
The S on her name is longer, more accentuated. It's not Syba, but Sssss-yba. The Y reads in this case as I from Incel, not I from I-phone. So you read her name as Ss-ee-bah.
Makes a point of her inhuman origin, even though, like most of her specie, she was born and is living among humans

>>16019623
What does a Male MC have over a female MC? Besides she is destined to become the blood-queen, to rule alongside a blood-king....or does she? Anyway her gender is justified for the story that I want to tell. I'm not demanding you like it.
But I am asking you at least give it a try. It's 3 chapters in and I post a chapter every couple of days. I posted on /tg/ and I've gotten fair praise.

Warning, I make use of purple prose. I write very flowery and ornate and that's a stylistic choice. Some of.you might not like it but it serves the more metaphysical parts of the story well.