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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RSHL5rD8R-WmAPJwoGNoBu4AdamOkQY4xrwNbysBNa4/edit?usp=sharing

Hell-Anon here. Only going to post the first three chapters. I've been wondering if the beginning is too punchy and sudden, and if perhaps it would benefit by adding another chapter leading up to the moment the protagonist dies. I am a fan of plunging right in, but I also worry that the reader might not really empathize with the protagonist's situation.

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nBQqfx2AnFoC55tovM91pqKgCkXS_5MjW_Np9aCrTC4/edit?usp=sharing

Hell-Anon here. Little polishing here and there. Slow and steady. I am outlining the plotpoints I want to work towards and also working on reworking some earlier sections to try to improve the overall consistency and quality. Thank you all for your feedback and support.

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