/lit/ - Literature

>>10585070

punctuation is something i worry about more when i know the words are where i want them and im preparing for print.

>incredibly predictable

im okay with that

>you you you

it is a common word?

>I I I

also a common word,

>whole thing reads like a 1 week narrative ina diary entry

what doe sthat even mean

>don't feel bad

I really don't.

>but this is 4chan so im purposely being stupid instead of insightful

no, I got that. thank you for your clearly unbiased opinion about a personal poem for a friend, you definitely improved upon it with your enlightenment.