/lit/ - Literature

Madison walked along the sidewalk of Diamond city, her shadow being casted onto the nearby buildings when a single car drove by. The sound of helicopters filled the air, its search light moving to scan different areas of the city. Pink and blue neon signs lit the area into a weird colored hue, the lights buzzed incessantly. Madison looked to the electronics store window to see the visual news anchor reporting the different disturbances around the city,
"The rebels have been caught. The group known as the "Pill" gang have all received arrests for desecrating and tagging a corporate building...." the news anchor continued to drone on but Madison was no longer paying attention.

Madison continued on her way to the subway station...

One day i'll get the urge to actually continue writing some novels/short stories, how bad is my writing /lit/?