/lit/ - Literature

>>17687730
>Of arms they sang; the minstrels of times passed,
(It's in metre)

>>17648384
https://pastebin.com/NW21QGAw

I continued the story a little bit, feedback appreciated.
In the last thread i was told my sentences are too long so i'm trying to make them shorter.

>>17618910
Personally i wrote a lot of dark poetry intended to attack the rich and the powerful as a way to cope and let a kindled flame keep me warm but i feel like there is no better story than the kind and the well-meaning.