/lit/ - Literature

Let me know if you find it funny or amusing, it worked as a prompt. I see parts where I can edit it to make it paint a better mental picture. I'm testing the waters.

I apologise for the really lazy photo, hopefully it isn't a problem. I'm mobile posting.

>>15770417
I failed to understand what was going on, maybe I'm thick. A bit too heavy on the adjectives and not enough -this is what's going on- The section beginning with "he knelt" is promising. Took me a moment to realise his elation was the feeling of butterflies in his stomach.