/lit/ - Literature

Why does it seem like people enjoy my grounded realism type writing more than when I use science fiction conventions? Maybe it’s that my writing has improved over time. It could be simply the frame of mind while writing. Maybe there’s just a particular way I’m better at telling an interesting story. I’m not really sure. I feel like my dull writing style is the one I can really knock words out by the thousands, while the more tailored and unique voice is a struggle to squeak a few hundred out before the gag is done and the story is finished. I assume it ties back to my normal speaking voice and how I’m generally mildly amusing but never one to give a punchline.

Here was the most recent thing from last thread. Feedback of any kind would be appreciated. I feel lost.
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/36209/burgerpunk-pizza-time/chapter/642677/14-its-perfectly-legal