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Anonymous Wed Jun 5 03:36:36 2019 No.13241391 [View]
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Fantasy. My four main concerns are:

>Is the worldbuilding too much or just enough to set the stage and context?
>Does Poppy come across as generic or lacking involvement?
>Is Panache's verbal tic annoying?
>Do you consider the tone shift during the explanation of 'wrong warp' jarring/tonal whiplash-y?

>>	Anonymous Sun Jul 12 15:58:43 2015 No.6816512 [View] File: 216 KB, 749x578, 1435562626512.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>6816489 Just reread the OP. I getcha.

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