/lit/ - Literature

I don't really have much to post but to start us off, here's something I wrote in freshman year of college. In each paragraph, every word could only start in one of two ways. I think I did well with the constraint and was the only one in the class to completely avoid even determiners and whatnot that didn't fit the pattern.
Never got around to posting it so why not

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Finally hit the required word count after a few more painful hours of punching myself. Now I'd really appreciate some feedback, or anything that validates the ridiculous and pointless amount of time I sank into this