/lit/ - Literature

>>22969248
Hey Anon, I am now editing the chapter, and I think that this turned out alright.
I've tried expanding it a little bit, but beyond these four lines I feel like it's forcing myself.
There was a line about
>imbibing the invisible power of ionization
but while my story does have some element of understanding physical laws i.e science, making you a better mage, I think using the term ionization is a stretch too far.
Anyway, thank you for suggesting that I leave a note rather than just give up on it.