/lit/ - Literature

>>22587594
Grab a pack of tarot cards, or even just find an online database, and write about each major arcana, and the minor arcana if you feel up to it.
Treat each one like a character. Each one should have their own personality (Death, The High Priestess, The Fool, The Lovers, The Moon, The Sun, etc.)
>>22587571
heh.
I also played Tears of the Kingdom
Thoughts while reading
- bird beak blowjob sounds really uncomfortable
- some of the description is a little heavy handed "His avian features were striking" (just describe striking features instead), "Telin wore no pants, for nature had already provided him with feathers to conceal his private parts." (this idea is implied in the idea that he's a Harpy, so just describing his shirt and scarf were enough: I typically don't think of harpies wearing any clothing)
But this has potential, for some audiences no doubt
I think personally I was hoping for more of a classical harpy than a Rito