/lit/ - Literature

>>9262446
my feelings are hurt

city life, especially as contrasted with rural life, is an aggressive stimulus. it can be a positive or negative one, but no, i really don't believe it could be considered underwhelming, that's what i meant

>>9262453
i literally just said that i don't post writing under a trip lol. what i write is extremely personal and i prefer for it to be anonymous, even when it's published. i picked that quote because i thought it would be an obvious joke :)

>>9262471
okay, i hear you. i would still try to restructure that part. his opinions come off as very passive, not like those of someone who is "raging" on the inside

>>9262490
it's gorgeous, what a lucky tyke you were. people who live by large bodies of water always have the nicest skin

>>9260034
mentally revert to a childlike state and metamorphose through a nouvelle puberté