/lit/ - Literature

>>18837632
Picked another random page. This shit is literally "I did this. I did that. I did this. I did that." 280 pages of this garbage.

And the content is literally just you jacking off about how many girls this guy gets and how he's like "hurrrrrrrrr wait a second sex bad" for 280 pages. Your massive ego and juvenile brain really stick out like sore thumbs. It's like I'm reading the most smoothbrained high-school quarterback finally connect two of his braincells together.

And if I'm honest it's way better than the shitkicker shit you posted here (that shit is literally seventh-grader tier), but your awkward purple prose is still far below satisfactory. And no, I'm never going to bother reading your plot. I'm sure its boring.