/lit/ - Literature

>>20340029
These are good points, thank you Anon

I am not a master writer, however these are some of my tips. If you have discord on your phone or something like that, make yourself a private channel dedicated purely to your writing. Make subcategories for all of your ideas. My best thoughts and most vivid descriptions or poetic lines come to me when I'm doing anything but writing, so it's nice to be able to just go sort things in there and draw from them later.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DRlv01MC7xhMr06IDZ-Y1BBDQkuc7cdsb34GJe5JFwU/edit?usp=sharing

I'm in the process of trying to rework the beginning... I think the tone falls short/flat of what I'm going for. I want to create a feeling of the absurd, where the protagonist is out of their depth and more nervous than scared.

(Hell-Anon, by the way)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DRlv01MC7xhMr06IDZ-Y1BBDQkuc7cdsb34GJe5JFwU/edit?usp=sharing

>Finished sex scene after 60 pages of buildup.
>Starting to tinker with the first 20 pages again.
>Never been more motivated.
>Need to trim down some of the flowery prose in parts
>I also still need to correctly punctuate all of the dialogue from the beginning.