/lit/ - Literature

So, I posted some short stories, snippets really, in both the critique thread AND the sci fi general and got no response, so I’m gonna bite the bullet and make a thread for it in search of some critique.

Here is the archive of the original /tg/ thread I made for these snippets:
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/59829402/#59829402

Yes, these are “genre fiction” which I know some of you guys hate, but I am trying for well done prose, as well as conceptual proficiency, of which are supposed to be somewhat “mysterious and unknown” to the reader in some cases, causing them to be drawn into the setting to learn more about the universe/galaxy I’m creating.

NOTE: I wrote 90% of these, other anons did the rest. Rip me a new one boys.

I know this isn’t really per usual, but I wrote some short stories, snippets really, for my posthuman ttrpg setting on /tg/ today: >>>/tg/59840403

I wrote most of those, other anons did the rest. Critiques? Rip me a new one fellers.