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Reposting because no one replied

>inspired by LA Noire
>synopsis: the guy that does chalk outlines for crime scenes takes his job too seriously

https://pastebin.com/Px73Xa8Z

I submitted it to a writing contest but it got rejected. I don't need to hear if my tenses are inconsistent or something, just wanna know, is it any good? Any other general critique?

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