/lit/ - Literature

>>23056206
Summarize it,in a sentence.

I could take your criticism more seriously if I could grasp your reading comprehension.

>"Examine the writing not the art"
Art BAD.
>"It's a storyboard, a work in progress."
TOO MANY WORDS.

Not exactly batting a thousand here. I even made the panels nice and big in the video version. There IS something going on,but I don't think you will do other than offer more inanity.

As for Bone,pic related is what that was ripping off. FoneBone. Cow races. If that is what your tastes druft towards...it explains a lot.