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Anonymous Tue Mar 29 20:45:44 2022 No.20140555 [View]
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>>20140281
The purpleness is really improved, nice going there. But still almost no connection to the thoughts and emotions of the POV char- why are they there, why is this important, why do they care if they die beyond keepin breathin' (and definitely significantly limit that kind of repetitive gimmick)

Also don't feel like you need to rush it out, writing is a reflective a solitary activity. Take yoru time in drafting, edit, edit, and edit some more.

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