/lit/ - Literature

>>8816573
Yeah looking back the first sentence is pretty bad (I wrote this months ago) but I think what I wrote has promise. I'm essentially writing a religious text, a religion I'm making up of course, that covers creation and a story about the human race developing its relationship with a god.

I'm using obscured language like that because I want to recreate that feeling an inexperienced reader gets when they first read the Bible or Shakespeare, being confronted with a kind of language they aren't used to. I'm also a big fan of puns and puzzles and I personally love reading things written like this, things I have to spend time deciphering.

And yes, some of this needs really heavy editing