/lit/ - Literature

>>21919506
I would stay away from grammatical writing quirks until you've mastered clean, crisp writing. Look to the russians for this because many of them are great (Chekhovs short stories should always be on hand as far as I'm concerned). Many writers advocate for clean, simple writing, and if you chose to move away from it should be a choice--in my opinion.

/lit/ what do you think of this extract? Do you mind the flow of it, in terms of scentences lengths and how I've arranged the information? I guess it's also an example of how I use punctuation lol so we'll see if I'm full of shit :).