/lit/ - Literature

>>10110786
I love this. Really simple but you already establish three prominent things. Could be good.

>>10109762
This. Just edit it more and it'll be good.

>>10109770
I like it, it reminds me of 100 Years of Solitude

>>10109948
Start with "On a bleak morning without shadows, Jacob...."

>>10043089
No way. There isnt a trace of occlusion or obfuscation, it's completely natural and raw. As if a father in this day and age would occupy himself with the mad ramblings of his six year old kid, aint no self-respecting red blooded Dad would encourage that "faggy behavior" Think about it, who pays attention to kids? This was one of those moments of a pure and unadulterated ray of genius shooting through the cosmos. I doubt Nael himself will ever outdo it.

What do you do when you finish a book? I typically spend the night thinking and make some notes about it, read a summary to refresh details in my mind, then read some reviews. Asking because it feels like any new thoughts and enthusiasm die down within a day or two, and I'm wondering if that can be extended at all