/lit/ - Literature

Got an idea for a novel. A guy raised in a very religious environment finds out the girl he loves, and everyone thought he would marry and whom was also raised in the same way, isn't a virgin, causing him to have a breakdown and loss of faith. This spirals into him running away from home, forming a punk band with two other members, falling into an alcohol and drug addiction while releasing two of the best punk albums of all time, and then finally killing himself, completing the absolute defilement of his soul. A story about the fragility of beauty. It's also almost entirely inspired by the song 'Die, Die, Die My darling' by Misfits.

What you guys thinks?

>>22196458
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=upQd5wTkL0I&ab_channel=Ch5ActionNews

>Taking a piss at work after shift ends trying to get all my to directly inside the whole in urinal
>realize I will never amount to anything and that I'm a slave in my soul, and that I hate my mom and my father is dead
Haha

>>21282427
I actually typed 'who' first but it sounded weird so i changed it. I assumed since i'am using the general word 'woman' and not refering to a perticular person i can use 'which'.

>>17074825

I become jaded from the moment i open my eyes. How do i even begin to cultivate motivation for anything when my first thought of the day is "I'am going to kill myself in the near future"? I picked a date, i don't really know what criteria i used to pick it up but i like the date, it's around 3 years from now. I would think about the dream i had, if i can remember it, and then i start to contemplate on how my life could be so unfulfilling and joyless. I'am supposed to be living the best years of my life, where youth alone should invigorate me, but there is nothing of the sort i can point to in my experience. I would caress my pillow a little wishing it was a partner and I think to myself, i have no reason to live, nothing to look forward to, my best years are gone and they didn't bring me any joy or give me any hope, so what are the chances the future has anything for me? My only contribution is living as a paragon of sombreness. The rest of the day is just marked with deliriums and my mind trying to do anything to avoid the kettle of vultures that are my true thoughts concerning myself.

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>>11473677
Sorry mang, it was pure undiluted shitpost. I can’t imagine how someone could argue that for real