/lit/ - Literature

We're a minute short now, so I might have to add a few more lines. First page is much improved, but I think we still need to remove some unnecessary actions and stage directions

https://www.scribd.com/document/551280851/Unfiltered

What should I change for my Nolan-canon Joker film? It can't be produced now that they made a real one, but I'd like to improve the third act.

https://www.scribd.com/document/551280851/Unfiltered

nice try, gardner, but you'll never defeat gang weed

>>20785677
it's true, gang weed the movie, the finest script ever put to paper, was never produced because the author is an aryan jew

>>20784258
i'll have you know i'm the foremost author of the modern era

>>20720894
second best

>>20720653
what, indeed

>>20719525
if you think that's good wait until you see gang weed the movie

>>20656400

we were robbed

>>20634841
https://www.scribd.com/document/551280851/Unfiltered

I think we should cut the second paragraph, but it might confuse readers. I'll have to edit the script again once I'm in Hell

>>20592923
meanwhile gang weed the movie still never won an oscar

>>20579108
>not having gang weed the movie memorized

gang weed the movie is a kabalistic allegory disguised as batman fanfiction so there's that

>>20555509
i would post the script but you don't have a gang weed gold account

>>20553343
it's no gang weed the movie

>>20519754
it's a kabbalistic allegory

you wouldn't get it

>>20519154

>>20374641

>>20362694
how should i fix act 3

https://www.scribd.com/document/551280851/Unfiltered

>>20359670
"National Bestseller author De'nesha Diamond burst onto the scene as the co-author of the gritty Desperate Hoodwives tales. The Essence magazine recommended series has taken the street-lit game by storm and paved a brand new path for the edgy Memphis native. Understanding that there is a fine line between glorifying thug life and telling it like it is, De'nesha Diamond spins cautionary tales inspired by personal experience and the heartbreaking stories that make our nightly news. In the end, she aims to deliver hope, even if sometimes there are no rides in the golden sunset."

really makes my inner gamer want to rise up

>>20346927