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>> No.22010674 [View]
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>>22010637
>writing 1169 pages and never once thinking you should learn how to format dialogue
Also incorrect capitalisation in first sentence. I can give you one gold star least since that first semicolon is used correctly. But yea do some serious editing before expecting a human to read this.

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>1) Avoid adjectives
>2) Avoid adverbs
>3) Avoid the passive voice
>4) Show, don't tell

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