/lit/ - Literature

Ok I read The Sound & The Fury 3x this summer... Let's talk about it /lit/.

>>7216547
Zombie Nouns:

Situation, emasculation, conversation, impression, generation, majority, humanity

Lexical Diversity: 25.63 %

Content Carrying Words: 52.07 %

Personal Vocab Diversity: 42.32 %

Yr longest words: subconsciously, unfaithfulness ← & yes long words are bad.

Don't ever use semicolons, ye just fuck it up like a fuck up. Yr grammar is otherwise tight—so there's that.

You would address yr dead wife as 'woman'? I'd like to SMACK the fedora off yr head.

Also yr grammar isn't all that tight, I take it back—Indian style. North American Non Applicable Amerindian Native Peace Pipe Puffin style.

Ditch that bit at the end, it takes away from the last line.

>>6838635
You'd be surprised at the things people will do in order to get recognized. I heard you swing that rhetorical bat through the air right there. Fwish. And then a clank in the dirt by the pitcher's mound.