/lit/ - Literature

>>22860531
Thank you for your assistance fren.
>>22860536
See when you try to sell it to me like that i want to read it.

But this is an excerpt from the first chapter;

"Why would I suddenly have such an excruciating headache in the middle of the night?

And it’s really painful!

Could it be something like a cerebral hemorrhage?

F**k, don’t tell me I’m going to die young?

I need to wake up! Now!

Eh? Why doesn’t it seem to hurt as much as before? But why does it still feel like a blunt knife is slicing through my brains…

From the looks of it, sleep is impossible. How am I to show up for work tomorrow?

Why am I still thinking about work? This is some authentic headache. Of course I have to take time off! I don’t have to worry about my manager’s grumblings!

Hey, putting it that way, it doesn’t seem too bad. Hehe, I can end up getting some spare time for myself!

Throbbing pain inundated Zhou Mingrui, allowing him to slowly accumulate immaterial strength until he was finally able to move his back and open his eyes. He finally broke free from his reverie."

I get it's a translation and have delved into more then a few bad translations of Korean, Japanese, Chinese even Philipino works in pursuit of novel entertainment. More often then not the above monologuing is a hallmark of a character who espouses the obvious frequently throughout the novel(which annoys me to no end). I stuck with it a few more chapters and yeah the writing (or translation) didn't improve. I'm glad you found a novel you enjoy and that you feel so passionate about it, also sorry that i cannot share your enthusiasm.