/lit/ - Literature

>>20788822
An actual line from this book

>>20409964
I gave up on this book about 60 pages in. It's an OK idea for a book, but the writing style is really bad and I just couldn't get past it. It was just exhausting to read.

Pic related is an actual quote from the book, page 7

There's also this weird repetition of unimportant words sometimes four or five times within the same paragraph that's super noticeable, like "place" or "said" that make it seem like it's written by a kid. If that's deliberate then good job, I guess but it was just too much for me.