/lit/ - Literature

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I like it. First time I've read to the end of a /wg/ excerpt in ages. Maybe that means I have a child's attention span. As for inner journey vs non-physical realm, I think fairy tales are essentially about inner fears and desires materialising and taking on a life of their own as grotesque and fascinating creatures and scenes, so it would be truer to the spirit of the form to make her visit an actual world instead of experiencing a mere hallucination. But also, for a fairy tale, what's the real difference between a hallucinatory journey and a real one? The effect seems to be the same.

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