/lit/ - Literature

Here are the seven reasons:
>1. You're not conveying the character's personality.
>2. You're talking about what the character is like but you're not showing it. >3. You're showing your character's least flattering traits without giving a reason for why they are that way.
>4. You're not conveying what the character wants.
>5. You're not showing the problem preventing the character from getting what they want.
>6. Your character is a stereotype or built on tropes.
>7. You're not including sensory information to place the reader in the character's shoes.