/lit/ - Literature

WOOOOOW

Both of the fiction I sent in and the poem was included!

Thanks much!

>>2032932
>>2032932

That...yeah, that is one thing I should probably do before entering this.

Well, at least I got you to read John Donne.

HAHA YEAH READING ROCKS, ANON!

I lol'd heartily at...all of this stuff here.

OP, Stewart...errthing.

>>1986048
>>1986048

Wow, I was beginning to just give up!

Many thanks Anon!

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Help me out, /lit/.

I can't live my life as WillowPumpkin. Make me a God.

> fury of a badger

I lol'd honestly.

I just don't even know what to make of this.

>>1956970
>>1956970

I feel like I'm asking the reader these questions but I do see your point. From time to time, when I'm thinking to myself or whatever, I tend to talk and question aloud to myself. It's almost like I'm questioning the concept of things just so it can be answered - if the main character went directly into a tirade about something that is bothering or puzzling to him without giving an intro to it, it seems odd. Again, I see the problem - it's turning it into some rhetorical thing which is unintended.

The best part for me will be the dream/memory sequences. I love to use stream of consciousness, I love to play around with words and deterioration of the mind in relation to prose. It's like a playground of literature!

Current novel project; reposting for previous interest:

The story takes place primarily in a house the size of a crawlspace, owned by a 23 year old man named Clyde, where he spends most of his days imagining his perfect woman - he draws shoddy images, writes poetry, and incites himself to have common dreams about her, all while commonly pleasuring himself to the thought of ever finding such. The book is divided into 2 parts: the first, titled "Awake" revolves solely in the place of Clyde's home, circulating solely on his lack of passion/self doubt among his work, his serious in and out depression, previous interest in the military (the section holds multiple flashbacks to his training experience, based on trigger words), an extended dream with a girl, which includes inner turmoil within Clyde between his sexual nature and the need to find more so along with the struggle to understand what is the middle of these lines, and attempting suicide at the end of the section by trying to jump from his window – the section ends with a poem that blows out of the window onto the ground nearby written by Clyde.

>>1944471
>>1944471

GET BLACKRAPED SON