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Jumper/Runner, &amp 005

Jumper and Runner, &amp issue 005. End scenes.

>>20855765
Ah yeah, I've read all your stuff. The ESLness is obvious (especially in 012), but it's readable. I'll try to give them a re-read and get back to you tomorrow or so with something more detailed. Shiva's Phallus was the sort of thing I'd like to see more of, and the Burger story was funny, but I remember reading Warszawa Wileńska and finding it be a sort of obvious/pointless story with very stilted, awkward dialogue. Sadly, as another anon said last thread, being ESL is going to really hold you back until you've got a really good handle on the language. I think you've just gotta practice more before you can hope to express yourself clearly in English.

Also, on Marginal Lives, I didn't find it as good as other anons had said. I saw it mentioned in the 011 release thread too. It managed to capture a sentimental feeling, but I didn't find it particularly interesting or well-written.