/lit/ - Literature

>>14020916
Thank you. Like I said I'll be doing revisions later, I really find your critique helpful.

I'll focus on improving my prose, and doing less play-by-play stuff like you said. This is the first time I've tried to seriously sit down and write an actual story (I'm pretty much entirely self-taught when it comes to writing) so I'm getting what feedback I can.

You only have free will if you can control your desires and drives. If you are able to overcome the sex drive, you will be free. Otherwise, you will be a slave for the rest of your days, to be set off by the next passing stimulus.

should i learn german just to read books?
i feel like i would have no other use for the language

>>8267795
>September 23, 2016

Has anyone on /lit/ submitted a banner to the 4chan Banner Contest? And if so, which banner did you send?

I remember a mosaic portrait of DFW was a banner for a while.

Weekly reminder Miéville is a plagiarist.

>>8198468
Why are you hating on /lit/'s collective husbando so hard?

>>7353200
Why is this upsetting you so much?

>>6784240
/g/ faggot here
Do you still have the file? If it still contains the raw data then it should be salvageable.
I might be able to help.

throwaway123123@cock.li