/lit/ - Literature

>>19257296
>I've got a long life ahead of me and I can't live like this

If you're ever feeling down, just remember to

Row, row, row your boat
Gently down the stream
Merrily, merrily, merrily, merrily
Life is but a dream.

>>16479228

This >>16483234 is good advice.

Indeed, your post reflects this suggestion, naturally, in its account of the growing distance between the players, and the accompanying disillusion/disappointment (which, indeed, is something that everyone can relate to).

This change, if it feels real and organic, will in all likelihood give your work greater depth than it would otherwise have had. Blessings in disguise...?