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The Village Needs a Poet - 5/10. Not a fan of poet-poems, and half of the lines are useless.
>This nail needs a cross
Stood out as nice. Who puts "a coal" in the fire opposed to putting coal in, metre-aside?

On Spectrum Drive - 8.5/10 Nice imagery and language, good use of the space. No real complaints.

we are not/we are - 7/10. Have you heard of tumblr? It's great. Not awful.
>we are scarred and scratched/and bruised little pieces of person
This is a great line that makes many of the others unnecessary.

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The Other Boat 8/10. Decent voice. Was almost interested in the sub-narrative. 2deep4me but at least it wasn't beating me over the head.

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