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>>22317168
Same but my 2 main characters are just my split personality. One loves the world, one fucking hates it.

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>>22186981
This works better because I don't really know (well, I know, but let's assume I don't) the protagonist. You paint the character as a normal dude, which is probably the intent.
I don't know if I like the second person you, but it's more of a taste matter than anything.

Like I said, I expected worse. Nothing I read here is bad per se.

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