/lit/ - Literature

>>17824701
I'm doing something similar. If you just want to revise them post more information and I'll try to help. What are the plot points? At what point do you feel the story has gone wrong? What is it you feel needs to change and what needs to stay in order to keep your story your story. Some points in revision can become a ship of Theseus in terms of story identity and maybe its better to come to port in something new, or maybe retaining some ethereal identity in the original draft is something very important to you. Just give me something to work with and I'll help you workshop your way through it if that's what you want.