/lit/ - Literature

>>6863990
Hey. I imagine you know what I mean by: Bad Writing Trip Wires. Y'know, like the kind of thing that makes you stop reading?

Ok—so I took a second, a breather. If you change yr title to Eyeblink, it will make yr 1st sentence bearable.

But ye have to be fucking kidding me w/ the en-dashes. I'm being baited? I didn't get the vibe that you could go meta—so you probably just hit the minus sign thinking that you could direct sheer Lovecraftic horror in prose that has fucking --- - - - - - - all over it.

Ok—so honestly I think you have the right idea. Some darkness reached out from the deep and grabbed yr hand and said type me make me scare scare ooga booga and I commend that. Just clean up the eyeroll tripwires and dodge that internal axe-blow begging to come from w/in.