/lit/ - Literature

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Okay well I'm gonna start using this for a name. I plan to work on my Calvin Dall story a little more this morning and I'll post a the edit in a pastebin. As for >>15740477
It is going to be a novel. it is a fantasy setting and the prologue establishes this but I had left that part out because I'm still tweaking it. I just wanted to get a sense of if this is a decent attempt at setting a scene, having dialogue, and introducing a main character. In regards to the names being western and also Latin, I was planning to go all Latin but I don't like that most of them end in "-us" or "-as" so the names need more tweaking. I mainly want them to be easy to pronounce and all have a kinship to their region. I find it completely immersion breaking when every character in a fantasy book has a completely different sounding or looking name. Admittedly the names of people and places are the thing I'm having the most trouble with right now. Thank you for your critique and hopefully you'll read the changes you had a direct effect on because I think they were good suggestions.

Looking forward to reading more of everyone's work and I'm glad I discovered this general