/lit/ - Literature

>yes, but what does it MEAN?
>I couldn't divine an ounce of meaning from this schlock
>the meaning of this text eludes me; unfortunately I cannot recommend it
>you see, Pynchon is significant because of the meaning hidden between the lines
>if the author had paid more attention to character development, I may have enjoyed this more
>I found the plot to be predictable and boring
Any I missed?

>https://pastebin.com/0JWPxT3y
I've posted this before but I'm getting ready to start trying to pitch it as a short story as I continue to work towards something of novel length. I'm not sure if there's a single person on the planet who'd sit through 3000 words of this, much less publish it. I've been over it with a fine tooth comb—anything you see is the result of a conscious decision. I mean that, anything. Could use some feedback, bullying, dick rubs, anything. Any feedback is welcome and highly appreciated. More specifically, I'd love to be pointed in the direction of any journals or magazines that are willing to publish (highly) experimental fiction.

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