/lit/ - Literature

>>8141210
I suppose you're right, and I'm just being overly self-critical. I'm going to introduce some young characters soon who need things explaining so that could be a good opportunity. But thank you for the advice nonetheless you've made me step back and think.

>>8141221
I'm mainly imiting Asimov at the moment which I don't feel is bad, but I'm trying to bring some rougher prose so I'm referring to Pohl's Gateway a lot now as well.

I like how Asimov weaves speech and descriptive sentences well. As you may be able to tell I am not a literature student in the slightest.